"Unofficial" Chise Critic, and other stuff.

[bockaemonkae]

OK i am the unofficial chise grader, and other stuff. Becuase i love chises. I do not have the attention spand to do one so yea im the chise grader.

For my avatar im thinking about making a badge. Ill give suggestions tips, grades, and ill bash your chise if you have soulja boy as a mascot (pun intended).

If you want your chise to be graded pm me.

[Marlinsfan99]

:rotfl: yeah hate on us rappers but one day we will take over the world right ATL my rapper friend

[Lupe]

I don't need a rookie grading my chises :P

[bockaemonkae]

:rotfl: yeah hate on us Skateboarders but one day we will take over the world With Bocks skateboarding friends.

I agree with you marlins...DONT GO EDITING YOUR MESSAGE NOW ITS OVER.


Wow wow dont go all stewie griffen on me..

[ATL Jones Bro3]

Yeah marlins lol.

A women on my left, a women on my right, what theres no women in Bockaemonkae sight!!!

OHHHHHHHH!!!!!!

[Marlinsfan99]

Yeah marlins lol.

A women on my left, a women on my right, what theres no women in Bockaemonkae sight!!!

OHHHHHHHH!!!!!!
:rotfl: :rotfl: :rotfl: :rotfl: OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH you just got dissed and I hate skateboarders


When I see a skateboarder running down the street,I just trip his as.s so he breaks his feet

when he is one the ground I say get out of here, he says but Bock send me here I wanted to kiss rappers feet!

OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

[ATL Jones Bro3]

I run wit my crew, but they don't like you, you smell like Dodo!!!!

[bockaemonkae]

Yeah marlins lol.

A women on my left, a women on my right, what theres no women in Bockaemonkae sight!!!

OHHHHHHHH!!!!!!


First of all. The women do not count. let me redo that for you.

My Grandma on my left, My mom on my right, what theres no women in Bockaemonkae sight!!!

OHHHHHHHH!!!!!!..


I have a girlfriend. 6 girls liked me last year son!

[ATL Jones Bro3]

But.. girls slob on my knob, like corn on the cob....

Bock cant handle, we burnin him like a candle!!!

[Marlinsfan99]

When he grabs up we slip out like Butter he is as slow as Caron Butler!!!

[bockaemonkae]

Atl Just fell im ringing him like a bell.

He got nothing, he huffing and puffing.

He think he can rap but he aint got crap.

Hes a fighter, ill bring a liter.

Youll get torched, Marlins and i will bring a FORK



O A WHITE BOY JUST SPIT SOME ON YOU!!!

[Marlinsfan99]

HAHAHAHA you call that spit

when we get a hold of you will have to eat through a straw ,cause we will kill you just like the crow

[ATL Jones Bro3]

Yo Bock yo rapz is sht,

So lemme spit,

Ya can't do nothin when it comin to spitin on the mic,

Tajke a hike

Hell rida bike,

just get outta hear

take ya fear

You aint gonna beat yo worst nightmare,

Yo gettin burnt like a garycoleman grill

I'm alwayz makin dollar billz

Cuz when it comes to the honeys i got it

They know you SUCK D.ick!!

[Sonicsfan34]

Atl Just fell im ringing him like a bell.

He got nothing, he huffing and puffing.

He think he can rap but he aint got crap.

Hes a fighter, ill bring a liter.

Youll get torched, Marlins and i will bring a FORK



O A WHITE BOY JUST SPIT SOME ON YOU!!!


Bock you need to stop rappin, you know you really suck, you braggin bout how 6 girls liked you, but they was ugly as ******

OHHHHH!

[Marlinsfan99]

Look at your posts look at mine you can say I dont go out of my house but guess what I have a life! I even have a wife,when ATL calls you, you say yes sir I will get my MOM but when he picks her up he said dont mes with my Co.ndo.ms!

OOOHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

[Detroitplaya]

do you grade *****es?

[Marlinsfan99]

Bock you need to stop rappin, you know you really suck, you braggin bout how 6 girls liked you, but they was ugly as ******

OHHHHH!
:rotfl: :rotfl: :rotfl: :rotfl: :thumbsup: Even Sonics know how to rap! LMAO burned by Sonics

[bockaemonkae]

Bockaemonkae is gonna step out da door.

Cuz he is whipping atl on the floor.

Sonics think he can rap.

I just say "Ever heard of phonics"

Atl cant spell

He is gonna go to hell.

Marlins has no life.

He doesnt have no spice.

Im out of here boys.and Atl.

Look at my posts i can spell.

Yo mamas are hard to lift easy to nail.

All you guys fail!

[Marlinsfan99]

You know we are friends and we are tearing each other up (mostly bock) but why done we start ripping Lupe up

[ATL Jones Bro3]

do you grade *****es?
havin fun every heard of it??????

Bock yo ryhmes still whack,

I kick it in a Cadilac,

While you ridin in a beattle, yo dck is like a needle,

You be walkin to boys sayin "This aint my finger"

You use yo dck to play baseball wiy ya balls and say dam what a digger.

Yo gonna die a virgin

While im doin in in the back of of ma saburbin!!!

[bockaemonkae]

You know we are e-friends and we are tearing each other up (mostly bock) but why done we start ripping Lupe up

Not real friends....I dont diss my friends.

Yea lets make fun of lupe i have nothing better today..Movies thursday and going skateboarding most of the day tommorow NO SCHOOL.

[Sonicsfan34]

Bock you know you cant rap, when you gonna learn.. your mom is like a door knob, everyone gets a turn!

[SuperNova2K8]

I have a girlfriend. 6 girls liked me last year son!
Dude im with a new girl every night, if you know what I mean. That's why I wake up so late.

[Sonicsfan34]

lol where is Lupe?

[Marlinsfan99]

While we get Money Cars and Girls everybody else is tryig to make our life a living hell

we dont get ***ed up just like you do we just get Bock to do a job or 2

[SuperNova2K8]

Bockaemonkae is gonna step out da door.

Cuz he is whipping atl on the floor.

Sonics think he can rap.

I just say "Ever heard of phonics"

Atl cant spell

He is gonna go to hell.

Marlins has no life.

He doesnt have no spice.

Im out of here boys.and Atl.

Look at my posts i can spell.

Yo mamas are hard to lift easy to nail.

All you guys fail!


please please..your going to make me cry to my momma wit all ya *** *** white boy rap.

[SuperNova2K8]

havin fun every heard of it??????

Bock yo ryhmes still whack,

I kick it in a Cadilac,

While you ridin in a beattle, yo dck is like a needle,

You be walkin to boys sayin "This aint my finger"

You use yo dck to play baseball wiy ya balls and say dam what a digger.

Yo gonna die a virgin

While im doin in in the back of of ma saburbin!!!
You say you kick it in a Cadilac
Son thats really wack
Cuz the last thing I heard you were crying on your back.

[Marlinsfan99]

ive prayed 1000 nights and done 100 crimes hoping that i dont die this time but times are harder so i play harder. money is my motivator nig'g.a but my game is my life

[Detroitplaya]

This is a bunch of 14 year olds rapping, so since im 14 ill join.

ballparkfranke7: hey cutie
ballparkfranke7: go throw a pncake in the river
MRxINCREDIBLE GR: LOL HUH
ballparkfranke7: your apple's growing hair
ballparkfranke7: dont run
MRxINCREDIBLE GR: my apples have had har
MRxINCREDIBLE GR: id like you to say that to my face
ballparkfranke7: lace

PWNED!

[Marlinsfan99]

You say you kick it in a Cadilac
Son thats really wack
Cuz the last thing I heard you were crying on your back.
:eek: All I can say is This guy can RAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[SuperNova2K8]

Yo Detroitplaya im callin you out
You seem really in doubt
cuz you 'bout to be schooled


You cant rap, so just fall in a trap----***est rap ever by a black man.

[ATL Jones Bro3]

What you doin a 3 line verse

Its like you tryna dig you grave in the batlle

I'll buy the herse

You cant get no worse than that rythme you just spit

You elementary lika fresh paka ritz bitz,

(to supanova)

[Marlinsfan99]

A torn ACL put you out for the season but not even a kick in the nu.ts can take away my hijos!

Detroitplaya cant even play with himself much less with a girl so DP when you can handle a real girl call me and I will send her right back there

[SuperNova2K8]

I see ya dont like my 3-line rap.
Well ya full of crap.
So go into the bathroom and play with some bubble-wrap.

[Detroitplaya]

My name is DP and i got a license to kill
you be dissin cause you know my rhymes are ill
When i got the mic in my hand i cant be matched
the rhymes are bustin while the flow is hatched
killa sons 50 miles per hour
throw you on the ground and make this turn sour

yo yo yo

[bockaemonkae]

Yo Detroitplaya im callin you out
You seem really in doubt
cuz you 'bout to be schooled


You cant rap, so just fall in a trap----***est rap ever by a black man.


I aint black, I dont give a smack

ill step all over you.

Im white and im pretty uptite

You gonna be in for awful night.

Ima take a shower.

Then its on I GOT THE POWER.

[ATL Jones Bro3]

The only crap you see comin outta ya mouth,

Dam.. nothin ryme wit moth...

[SuperNova2K8]

yo bock I see your full of it
hold on ill be right back I need to go take a ****

[Marlinsfan99]

If you say you got the power you havent seen nothing I EVEN MET aUSTIN POWERS

[ATL Jones Bro3]

Nova couldnt cut it in the Big 10 on any rap statin so he could be declared uncannily WACK,

cus whatever he raps,apparently black, is just a waist of material like them damn fanny packs

[SuperNova2K8]

So you saying im wack?
When you only thing im herin from your mouth is AFLAAAAACK!

[bockaemonkae]

My name is DP and i got a license to kill
you be dissin cause you know my rhymes are ill
When i got the mic in my hand i cant be matched
the rhymes are bustin while the flow is hatched
killa sons 50 miles per hour
throw you on the ground and make this turn sour

yo yo yo

This white boy can rap damit!

[ATL Jones Bro3]

Sorry, but lying and posting up in subliminal text will never get Passed,
We clearly can see your more *** than 100 pages of the Playboy Mag.
But thats irrelevant, I could just post a few bars that question Intelligence,
Cuz your mind is absent of good flow like Black children and Negligence,
And this is the Contestant, A Newbie, Gran Thef trying get a Reference,
You in the Mix with Killer but this **** dont help ***s with a Sexual preference,
This is only development, shedding the extra weight like dietary supplements,
Like when Killer and Hitler murdered Mil.s when we controlled the Nazis Government,
Gran Thef, no petty thef, your inferior, could not steal a caravan with that Criteria,
You could hold hostage a Morgue and fail at capturing cases of Malaria,
I see a *****, Damn tasty and eatable, no lie I enjoy the Aroma,
Nobody matched my persona, I got crazy prices, get you half off a rental Coma...
Or the specialty for Gran Thef, a Flight Jacket with a reversal zip up Body Bag...
A John Doe tag, and a mummified pipe broken off in his ***,
If it happens that me Killer happens to win this battle, prepare for Violence,
Cuz the whole forum will join forces against me Killer vs the *** Alliance,
Gran thef is all glory, with his fabricated stories, I depicted hes not Villain,
Go head a lose your mind, you aint crazy just a little hazy from popping P enicillin,
**** you and your momz, but mostly your moms and her salivary Glands,
I swear she could suck my ribs in deeper than Hostages of murderous Afghans,
I have a poisonus flow, part Phython, have you tembling sweating in your Nylon,
Your a Super*****, just one touch of the Kryton, will have this Kid Bloodier than a Tampon.

[Marlinsfan99]

WOW ATL gets the prize from me

[bockaemonkae]

did not read...

[ATL Jones Bro3]

You can't touch my ish nova..

[SuperNova2K8]

**** you ATL my ****en mom is dead *****

[ATL Jones Bro3]

How am i sppose to know that???? Its just a battle rap dam.... My bad...

[bockaemonkae]

Atl is an idiot....

[Marlinsfan99]

How many of you think you can rap but you cant, you only wish to have the cadillacs us rappers have and when Bush did not help black people in New Orleans I felt offended too cause while you were dying he was making 1000000$ dollars an hour or 2

[Lupe]

I was updating my chise god damn I can't leave yall along for 5 mins :rotfl:

[Marlinsfan99]

our little friendship ring just snapped lol

[Lupe]

b/c of rap oh thats a rhyme can ya give me a dime?

[Marlinsfan99]

No because of stupid Skateboarding

[ATL Jones Bro3]

its a rap nova...... do you really think im trying to go after that... I dont even know your family so how do i know your mom is dead... SORRY........ PEACE???

[Marlinsfan99]

We did not lose People we loss friends that could post in our chises and could help us through hard times Im sorry everybody

[Lupe]

I can rap. Me and you marlinsfan now pie ****er

[Marlinsfan99]

Aight you start but promise not to get mad if I kill you

[Lupe]

No you start!

[Marlinsfan99]

Lupe thinks he can rap and start talking about stars but when he gets killed there is no going back cause when you talk smack there is not going back you could get shot at 2 3 4 times if I want!

[SuperNova2K8]

Consegui decir hola a todos mis *****s. Pero los que los dis yo pueden coger mi pie.

[Lupe]

I've never seen nothin' like you before,
I can kick you, higher than you can kick me,
I can kick you way up into a tree
Who wants a taste of my oo-long tea?
Everybody wanna see me break a leg,
Well I don't, but I like fried rice,
And I ain't got lice
I can put it in your chew,
Watch this, I can tiptoe while you take a ****
In my bathroom spy on you
While your little boy ****s!

[ghouse522]

You guys dumb

[SuperNova2K8]

Nunca he visto el nothin como usted antes, yo puedo golpearle con
el pie, más arriba que usted puede golpearme con el pie, yo puede
golpearle con el pie manera para arriba en un arbol que desee un?
Todos desea verme romper una pierna, receptor de papel que no lo hago,
sino que tengo gusto del arroz frito, e I no se consigue piojos puedo
ponerlo en su chew, miro esto, yo puede andar de puntillas mientras
En mi espia del cuarto de bano en usted mientras que su pequeño
**** s del muchacho!

[Sonicsfan34]

aye Lupe,

You aint gotta lie no more, we know what you did, it's clear to all of us, that your the Chocolate Rain kid.

:rotfl:

[Lupe]

I'm not the chocolate rain kid and sonicsfan all you gonna do is feel the rath of the COCONUT RAIN KID!

[Lupe]

Marlins is a chicken eh?

[imahussla]

dude i jus got hella dumb readin dis especially the Ima go in the bathroom and play wit some bubble rap

[Lupe]

Marlins is a chicken with no dicken

[Sonicsfan34]

Be quiet Lupe your rhymes is wack, ima go eat some dinner, take some lessons before i get back.

[imahussla]

slash dash cut anutha whole in yo azz

[Lupe]

Choke on your food for me sonicsfan

[SuperNova2K8]

la rociada de la raya vertical corto el anutha entero en asno del yo

[Prime Time]

I'm the official forum personal Jesus. :(

[SuperNova2K8]

Don't make fun of Jesus. It's bad.

[rh6 and dtrain]

Hey Bock, can you go and rate my chise lol, i want to know what you think.

[Lupe]

Jesus not gonna come down and kill me. Hey I'm makin fun of jesus haha party in the clouds jesus woooooooooo. heh I don't go to church O_o

[bockaemonkae]

go die lupe...

You are single handedly making me leave this site.

[Marlinsfan99]

I've never seen nothin' like you before,
I can kick you, higher than you can kick me,
I can kick you way up into a tree
Who wants a taste of my oo-long tea?
Everybody wanna see me break a leg,
Well I don't, but I like fried rice,
And I ain't got lice
I can put it in your chew,
Watch this, I can tiptoe while you take a ****
In my bathroom spy on you
While your little boy ****s!
lupe you are dumb and you are a whiteboy that cant rap

[Lupe]

You chicken out b/c you can't take me marlins!

[Marlinsfan99]

Lupe you just think you can rap but you cant you cant even dance you dance have expensive cars or nothing of my man Lars.

ATL Bock please tell this white boy he cant rap so he leves these forums because right here is where the ****** is @!

[bockaemonkae]

who the hell said it was because i cant rap?

Im on madden forums, and myspace

I don t really have time and lupe is getting on my nerves

[Lupe]

wtf I just told you to stay bock!

[bockaemonkae]

ps IM ATL!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[ATL Jones Bro3]

WTF??? Your ATL LMAO............

[Marlinsfan99]

wtf I just told you to stay bock!
Lupe what happened you cant rap no more?

[Marlinsfan99]

Hassan you read it?

[hassan]

MARLINS-ATL OWNNN

[Marlinsfan99]

How many of you think you can rap but you cant, you only wish to have the cadillacs us rappers have and when Bush did not help black people in New Orleans I felt offended too cause while you were dying he was making 1000000$ dollars an hour or 2
this was my favorite

[Mr.Clutch_Knicks12]

Reading this thread had to have been the most awkward thing I have ever done in my life...

[bockaemonkae]

ATL made this thread ackward cuz he cant rap.

[hassan]

Jealousy Kills Bock!

[rh6 and dtrain]

Hey Bock, you only a critic of bball chises?

[bockaemonkae]

Im slowy retiring..sorta


RH6 son!! you have to do a chise son.

[Marlinsfan99]

Reading this thread had to have been the most awkward thing I have ever done in my life...
:rotfl: why what did you think about it?

[Mr.Clutch_Knicks12]

why what did you think about it? I think it was very, very awkward.

[Marlinsfan99]

Im the best rapper alive right?

[rh6 and dtrain]

Hey Bock, can you critic my Bears chise, i might think about a bball chise, but i'lld do a college Sooners Dynasty first i think. Thanks man

[Marlinsfan99]

he quit these forums cause he couldnt take the heat! if you cant take the heat get out of the kitchen

[Randy_Moss]

Go hard or go home. Lol. You guys tore him up... :rotfl:

[Marlinsfan99]

Bock was one of the most active posters on here now he quit on this because he could not take the heat! he isnt used to losing

[Randy_Moss]

Who is the most actve poster???

[Marlinsfan99]

you mean of franchise makers? because I think its Me,Nova or ATL

[Randy_Moss]

Hmmmm... Man its easy to get posts. I've only been a member for like not even a day, andi m 30+.... Plus i slpet and had a 5 hour doctors appointment...

[Marlinsfan99]

yeah lol I joined on Feb and I have 3636

[Randy_Moss]

wow.... thats alot....

[Marlinsfan99]

lol Thats why I say Im one of the most active posters on here


check out my chise when you get teh chance ok?

[imahussla]

I joined in JUNE Im just gettin started really so look for an NBA update and NCAA update later tonight gotta go to work now tho.

[bockaemonkae]

i used to post alot but i dont really post a lot anymore..

Im talking to friends n hanging out

[Jordai]

What happend to the rappin?

Hey man what up wit the rappin?

I thought everyone of you was scrapin'

...Sorry.

[Marlinsfan99]

Jordai! when we beat Bock it was over

[bockaemonkae]

What happend to the rappin?

Hey man what up wit the rappin?

I thought everyone of you was scrapin'

...Sorry.

You ruined it..If we werent already done you would have ending it

[Marlinsfan99]

Bock he can rap better than you

[bockaemonkae]

Marlinsfan Is not tanned, he is like a nerd in the marching band.


Nice start

[Marlinsfan99]

Im not in the Marching band and neither are you,but I can tell yo usomething and that is that I can ball all over you!

[bockaemonkae]

Dont bring that crap in here.. Man im gonna go shoot a deer.

Lets go im not hipanic and im not black but ill show you i can rap.

This guy over here cant draw a straight line he cant even wear calvin klein.

[Randy_Moss]

...This shold be funny :rolleyes:

[imahussla]

oooh oooh I wanna play I wanna play

[Prime Time]

Who is the most actve poster???
Me... :thumbsup:

[bockaemonkae]

here you go marlins enjoy!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iKQG11NP4dQ

[Marlinsfan99]

you have ADD? white people cant rap ind Isaw your report card it seems you have 2 D's but Im sure thats for not staying attached!

[Randy_Moss]

here you go marlins enjoy!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iKQG11NP4dQ
why would you look something liek that up???

[Marlinsfan99]

he didnt even care thats how good he is

[Marlinsfan99]

why would you look something liek that up???
:rotfl: I wonder what else he looks up :lol:

[Marlinsfan99]

Dam nbock gave up!

so that means the undisputed champ is Jose "The Chsoe One" Villasmil

[bockaemonkae]

i havent giving up..

Um guys that video was posted in a thread in nba 2k8

Titled: A good way to haze rookies is to have them do the soulja boy


Later on he posted that

[Jordai]

What up with ATL and bockmonkae

I for one kinda think they are sucky

[Marlinsfan99]

ATL is straight bock is wack

[bockaemonkae]

ATL is straight bock is wack

Like your mom talking smack.

[Marlinsfan99]

LMAO please bock dont start it again cause i will kill you

[Lupe]

ahahahahahahaha

[Marlinsfan99]

what are you laughing at? lol

[bockaemonkae]

your mom....

[Lupe]

Bock shut up man you loser

[Marlinsfan99]

Lupe is 100% right that looks like something that Bock cant do at school even if he tried!

[bockaemonkae]

im not a loser at school...

If you think how I act on a forum is how i act in real life wow..man seriously wow

[Marlinsfan99]

Hey Im not the one that everybody hates now and you can make a thread for it if you dont beleive me

[bockaemonkae]

Thats it, im out of here..I cant stand being called stupid anywhere..

[Lupe]

Stupid Stupid Stupid. lmao

[bockaemonkae]

Thats it read the sigs and say your fair wells cuz im out

[Marlinsfan99]

LMAO make a thread asking who likes you and who likes me and lets see who gets the most yes

[bockaemonkae]

O know less people like me then Marlinsfan on a forum

my life is a complete failure..I cant live with myself

[Marlinsfan99]

I bet more people like me than you in the real life too. and yeah I got a girfriend hotter than what you will ever get so shut up

[Randy_Moss]

What up with ATL and bockmonkae

I for one kinda think they are sucky
ATL is OK....

Bocks is pretty g.ay.

[Marlinsfan99]

RM bock used to be alright until we knocked him out of here with the rhymes since then.................